Prompt response to Hemingway’s Iceberg from The Creative
Writer’s Notebook.
Exposed iceberg:
In the café, Jerry
studies the doctor’s report online. He’s
looking for hints of the number of years he has left. Hoping to make it to seventy, he picks up the
Wall Street Journal and tosses it into the garbage can. [written after the
Water Line]
Water Line:
A man of sixty-plus
years sits alone at the café table. His
neatly trimmed beard of mostly white hair partly covers his neck and black
baseball hat shades his eyes from the sunlight. Wearing khaki shorts with no
socks and black and white Converse, his legs are splayed around the table. He swirls the cup of his half-filled iced
coffee. Then takes a bite of his crumb cake with his right hand. Wiping his fingers on his shorts, he begins
taping on his tablet and glances at the newspaper. Shrugging his black hoodie over his
shoulders, he gets up and throws the paper in the garbage. Folds down his computer tablet, carrying it
under his left arm, and opens the door with his bent back. A January wind blows the door open.